The slow motion looked choppy and laggy but if you get it sorted the timing of it was great.
The clips are pretty long and it isn't super edited I don't really know what you could do probably add in more shorter ones or spit them up. Your transitions between the clips were alrighty.
You should remove the hud because well it doesn't look great with it.
Apart from that good job. Don't take it in a bad way teying to help out and give feedback.
